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It was so dark down here. Mori and his friends had found caves before; gleefully exploring the little crags in the earth that swallowed up the light. Wet and dark, full of strange insects and flying things. None had ever been as large or still as this. Now they clung to his robe like children as the walls of rock stretched high above, the flame of the single torch and candle barely illuminating the ceilings. Passages stretched on into the darkness, threatening to consume them all.
This expedition was the longest and most desperate. It had been many days since they arrived, or at least, they thought it had been. It was impossible to tell in the endless black. They were running out of food and water. Soon they would start fighting each other over the precious resources.
This cave was strange. It was quiet and still and dry. No echo of dripping water or scurry of little beetles or swoop of leathery wings.
The group stops at a split in the passage for a break. Mori passes around rations of dried vegetables and almost-bad rice and they eat their meager portions in a miserable huddle on the cold stone. Yousei is the one that finds it. In the flickering light of the small candle, a near-invisible trail of lichen winding off through the middle tunnel. It is all they need to lift their spirits and fling the ache from their joints. They gather their few supplies and hasten down the passage as fast as they dare, following the strange blue of the plant, mindful of sudden dips in the earth and praying there is no dead end. It seems like many hours before they hear a low, distant drone that gradually develops into the distant unmistakeable roar of rushing water.
The boys explode into joyous shouts and tug on Hayato's robe, urging him faster. They can feel the air growing damp and cold but they have found what they are looking for. Water! At long last. Perhaps there will also be fish or some of the strange flying creatures for them to eat. Water begins to drip from above and the walls and ground become slick. The noise becomes louder and louder still, echoing off the widening tunnel. The lichen gives way to another plant, equally blue but glowing faintly. Long tendrils creeping in delicate swirls and then great swathes across the walls until the passage finally ends quite abruptly in a small drop off that sends Jisei tumbling to the edge of their torch light.
They were unprepared for this discovery.
It is a room. Vast, enormous, endless in its girth and height. The walls stretch on to either side and there is no ceiling to be seen. They are standing in the dark, alone but for the sound of water in the distance.
This expedition was the longest and most desperate. It had been many days since they arrived, or at least, they thought it had been. It was impossible to tell in the endless black. They were running out of food and water. Soon they would start fighting each other over the precious resources.
This cave was strange. It was quiet and still and dry. No echo of dripping water or scurry of little beetles or swoop of leathery wings.
The group stops at a split in the passage for a break. Mori passes around rations of dried vegetables and almost-bad rice and they eat their meager portions in a miserable huddle on the cold stone. Yousei is the one that finds it. In the flickering light of the small candle, a near-invisible trail of lichen winding off through the middle tunnel. It is all they need to lift their spirits and fling the ache from their joints. They gather their few supplies and hasten down the passage as fast as they dare, following the strange blue of the plant, mindful of sudden dips in the earth and praying there is no dead end. It seems like many hours before they hear a low, distant drone that gradually develops into the distant unmistakeable roar of rushing water.
The boys explode into joyous shouts and tug on Hayato's robe, urging him faster. They can feel the air growing damp and cold but they have found what they are looking for. Water! At long last. Perhaps there will also be fish or some of the strange flying creatures for them to eat. Water begins to drip from above and the walls and ground become slick. The noise becomes louder and louder still, echoing off the widening tunnel. The lichen gives way to another plant, equally blue but glowing faintly. Long tendrils creeping in delicate swirls and then great swathes across the walls until the passage finally ends quite abruptly in a small drop off that sends Jisei tumbling to the edge of their torch light.
They were unprepared for this discovery.
It is a room. Vast, enormous, endless in its girth and height. The walls stretch on to either side and there is no ceiling to be seen. They are standing in the dark, alone but for the sound of water in the distance.
Literature
fabled life
i.
she talks through her wrinkles,
'i have no desire for food', she says.
i take her plate to the kitchen
noticing how the beetroot shavings bled into the skin of the chicken and brown rice.
it was blood, skin, and bone,
and the rice was a million starlike cells floating between.
this reminds me of my anatomy textbook:
we've been learning what's beneath our skin,
we learned that all cells divide. some cells often don't stop dividing.
other cells divide and stop when they should...
but not my grandmother's.
starlike, they explode, they shatter, they consume
they divide.
ii.
i want to be mad at my grandmother's cells,
but what would that do?
i
Literature
Almost
It's in the way you meet my eyes,
And the rest of the world melts away.
Right before we almost poured our hearts out.
It's in the way the smirk formed over your face
During the last dip
In that dance that we almost got to finish.
The way our hands touched for just one instant
Where times' hands finally rested
As I almost couldn't tell if it was deliberate or accidental.
The way you wouldn't look me in the eye
Your hand ready for flight on the doorknob
And I almost asked you to stay.
Unsure looks with unanswered questions
Silence like the smoke after a battle
Because you almost thought I had changed.
Looking at the moon like it has the an
Literature
an infinitesimal sibilance
a wisp of a whisper
remains in possessions
long after we're gone
perhaps forever
things we create
or build
or just treasure
faint echoes of others
faint echoes of us
still here
llp - dA - oct2013
DD - jun03/2015
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Prompt number two from #DesperateWriters: Caves. I am very proud of it. Hope you enjoy!
There Bunny are you happy now??
There Bunny are you happy now??
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